The Hawaiian Shirt
I noticed a big man snoozing in a chair wearing the shirt. The ocean was booming nearby. Short hop from there in my mind. Just had to be willing to wake up at 2 am to write it down.
In the old days "Hold Fast" written across the knuckles indicated a sailor. Having it on each finger would give them the grip they needed to work the ship's lines and stay alive in the rigging.
The Hawaiian Shirt Hibiscus and bent bamboo, in red and turquoise blue lay upon the shirt. Across his shoulders, peeking below a line of clouds, the setting sun’s rays ended abruptly at his short sleeves clashing with a tattoo which snaked down his arm. Only linen or silk, or some composition, could bear the weight of such color and texture. A storm approached across the shirt front. A palm tree leans precariously, while a four inch tsunami rolls in, tossing flotsam across the cargo pockets. The booming surf drowned his snores. Only one last button holds against the heaving swell beneath. In late afternoon the sun crept around the large umbrella overhead illuminating a tiny one below, cradled in the glass, clutched in his sleeping grip. The tattoos across his knuckles remained vigilant and still hold fast onto Margarita. San Patricio-1/23
Your descriptive writing literally “paints a picture.”🏖️🧉
Ha ha brilliant