The Lines
From a post of Carole Roseland about lines on her face. The mixing in of metaphor becomes very blended here.
I'm going to end the month of February with a poem on each of these last four days. Out with a bang.
The Lines A good poem should behave like something beautiful, every time it rolls in, the way gleaming foam does. After it recedes it leaves a gift shining in the sand, and it does so wave after wave, no matter how long since you last read it, more stunning in beauty each time. While the lines before you have remained the same, yours have not. From visit to visit they increase in number and depth, to better measure the gift before you, before you can no longer walk the beach but only murmur the best parts from memory, when the lines form more of you than the unlined parts.
Those closing lines are Just Perfect, Weston!
Lines, yup, gettin’ more each day. But as we learned in math, that a line goes on forever? Thanks, Wes!