Two sentences, the second one stumbling along like a tired man, pacing the rush of hunger, hurried eating and falling asleep.
The last View Some evenings I remember quite fondly. I often found myself at the end of a full day’s labor of building, fixing and making, with my arms worn to harmlessness, a general exhaustion throughout, overlaying an appetite for any food in front of me followed shortly by a hypnotic need for sleep that would sweep over me and cause me, should I dawdle, to lay my head just where I eat, a last close-up view of my fork and plate as my eyes close. 4/23-Cassis
Hard workers deserve rest.
Well crafted poem!