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Peter Whisenant's avatar

Your pacing is perfect. It evokes the transitory nature of the world as seen from the window of a train. The world as observed from a train has inspired a lot of writing, hasn't it? It seems almost everyone who writes at some point tries something in the genre.

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Megan Youngmee's avatar

a lovely read. I could feel the rhythm of the train

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