Train To Córdoba (from Málaga)
I love to travel by train. Sometimes the trip passes too quickly. Both of these towns have the accent on the first syllable which makes them quick to say.
Train To Córdoba While rushing up to and then past an olive grove, the flashes of silver in the deep blue green leaves with a fringe of poppies, is a sight to remember even at one hundred miles an hour. What are those fruit trees? Apple or oranges, I think but not peaches, at the beginning of the season. They line up their serried ranks, hurriedly in diagonal lines, now horizontal columns seconds later in a march forced by the clack of the track that passes for rhythm if not for the rhyme of this rushed inspection. Flying across a trestle bridge in a blink, above a tan and sandy stream bed, thin before the rains of spring and not a blossom yet in any orchard has winked at me. What looks like tiny brown bales a quarter mile distant is soon seen as box upon box of a beekeeper’s hive, not yet unstacked From Málaga to Córdoba is a fleet 49 minutes and before we know it or can record it, we are here, with an accent, quickly placed, on each first syllable.
Your pacing is perfect. It evokes the transitory nature of the world as seen from the window of a train. The world as observed from a train has inspired a lot of writing, hasn't it? It seems almost everyone who writes at some point tries something in the genre.
a lovely read. I could feel the rhythm of the train